It's probably okay if it's your cup of tea.
I found the pacing a little off, slow to start and suddenly picking up all at once like a landslide everything happens and you're at the end.
To me the characters could have stood to build up more tension and thoughts about each other with more intention. Because while that did happen, thoughts about the love interests, it just seemed overly dismissive or platonic and then suddenly more.
It is a cute story. But I didn't feel as engaged with it as I do with other stories like this.
I think adding in more friends for the characters to interact with as well might have helped with this, to help flesh out the character development rather than the development seemingly coming almost out of nowhere or at least only from each other. Perhaps some more flashbacks to previous events in their lives to explain their temperament and reasoning behind their actions and thoughts could have added in some areas.
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